U can make it

 
Sometimes u can make it on ur own….
yes true..
But most of the time we need some help…
what can i do
when i see a friend drown?????
Pray  and hope???
 
 
Just take my hand
i reach out to u…….
 
ur going down in ur created darkness
Life is to short  to be in this stade 
all this time ur down 
its wasted time.
darkness 
time is passing ..
days 
weeks
 
every day is a step down the ladder
u have to climb …. 
not descend
Put ur feet on my hands
i will help u to climb again
 
tears will not help
sometimes they do
not now
eyes are dry
no more crying
 
dont stop climbing
when ur halfway the ladder
u wil see light beams
not those ugly dark clouds
i will show u the way
 
life is to short to waste time
days
weeks
dont wait to long
ur almost on the lowest 
 

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20 Responses to U can make it

  1. Tridib says:

    I can not tell you in writing that I fell so much happy to read that somebody is there in the critical world
    who can help the people like that.
     
    Lots of love for you.
     
    Tridib 

  2. Magick says:

    Hi sweeti:
    This is really quite wonderful….sad, but at the same time, with a hint of achievement.  Did you write it??
    Hugs and Love,
    Diane

  3. dying2die says:

    Indeed My dear Chika you r so right each step takes me lower but i mayb have no friend to give me a hand .. i have been the frnd to teh world whose hand is always available.. but i didnt notice with time i have reaced soo low that i cant see myself anymore and no hand is able to reach me now..
    pray .. a girl like me.. just learns to live and MAy she have the patience and still b strong to help ppl put of their darkness.. now you might question me .. how can i being in darkness get ppl to a higher place..
    coz they know that i am in darkness and i understnd their darkness, i can motivate them  to get out of darkness .. and sumtimes i even go to light to leave them and then i come back to my darkness or should i say i support trhm and they suppot ,me to get out and then once they r out i start falling lower and they have another friend to pull them higher…
    Anyways TC
    bye

  4. Jorge says:

    We all need encouragement at times. Thanks for this. Be well,
    J.

  5. Enter says:

    Write more often…your uplifting thoughts would sure be an inspiration for many around. Hope life’s been treating you well and work’s not been too busy. Classes and study continue to be on my itenary as of now…as does praying for an Indian win against the visiting Aussies 🙂

  6. deepu says:

    ohhhh…i wil sooon come back…….

  7. Michiko's says:

    Hi sweeti san,
    I can understand How you felt about that some friends were under the clouds…what we can do to help them?
    this is a personally things…it’s hard to watchs them away from us….
    As you said don’t wait too long life is to short …. 
    Thank you for sharing,
    Michiko
     

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  9. Unknown says:

    Hello Sweeti,
     
    What a beautiful poem and so true. Life’s journey is so enjoyable with someone travelling along even when the road is smooth. A smile, a tender touch, a kind word, all help a person make it through life. One never knows when someone will need that little something to help them.
     
    People who follow the good paths in life far outnumber those who worship those who would control everyone. I’m glad that I have great friends on Spaces and blessed to count you as one of them.
     
    Peace & Blessings.
    rwc

  10. Michiko's says:

    Dear Sweeti,
    I would like to wish a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY and sincerely hope that will bring many more good news and lots of fun turning
    your DREAM into reality in NEAR FUTURE. I am going out tonight with my children and celebrate for my ex Ken his birthday …
    I thinking of you too.
    Have a great time with your loved ones, it’s 12-00 midnight in here 16th Oct. I hope yours 16th Oct????
    perphaps! I should wait till tomorrow? but my memorize was eight hours difference between in here and yours?
    I wouls like you to get my messages in the morning ha ha ha
    Michikoxxxxxxx
     
     
     
     
     

  11. Michiko's says:

    OOPUS! I was wrong your time is 7-06 am 15th Oct, sorry Sweeti san,
    Michiko

  12. Isabel says:

    Hello Sweeti!!
    How are you my friend?
    I love that poem…its a eye opener…
    Somehow got me thinking..
    Someone passed this to me and i loved it:
    What would you do if for every moment you were truly happy there would be 10 moments of sadness? What would you do if your best friend died tomorrow and you never got to tell them how you felt? So, I just wanted to say, even if I never talk to you again in my life, you are special to me and you have made a difference in my life. I look up to you, respect you, and truly cherish you. Send this to all your friends, no matter how often you talk, or how close you are, and send it to the person who sent it to you. Let old friends know you haven’t forgotten them, and tell new friends you never will. Remember, everyone needs a friend. dont ever leave the one u love for the one u like, because the one u like will leave u for the one they love.If you wake up in a red room with no windows and doors, DON’T panic.. you’re just in my heart!!! Send this to all the friends you want to keep forever…
    Today is Bestfriend Day. Send this to all of your friends, and me if I am one. If you get 7 back you are LOVED
    ""…..@.@.@.@..@……@……..@……….@…@…………@….@@…@…………..@@..@….@…………..@…@……@………..@..@………@……@..@…………..@..@.I……………..@….CARE………@………ABOUT….@…………….YOU…@……..@@@……@@@@..@….@……….@…@………….@@@……@@…….@@@…….@..@@…………………….@…………………….@…………………….@…………………….@…………………….@……………………@
     Wish you a great week dear friend!!
    Lots of love from ISA

  13. Rajeev says:

    Gorgeous!! :)i love the way its written!how’ve u been?peace & loveJeevy

  14. Gelert says:

    Just popping in via Jorge’s. we have a couple of blog friends in common I see. Enjoyed the visit
     

  15. Unknown says:

    Hello Sweeti,
     
    The Government’s indecision and lack of logic concerning the fuel
    crisis is due to secrecy and a lack of communication.
     
    While serving in the Air Force at Howard AFB in Panama, I was
    attached to a unit which required me to have a TOP SECRET
    clearance with SCI (Sensitive Compartmented Information). I can
    speak about some of this now-I have been debriefed and
    DECLASSIFIED. I even had my S-86 papers.
     
    My duty was to load and arm the ordinance for the then secret
    B-2 Stealth bomber. We were loading JDAM(Joint Direct Attack
    Munitions) and also exotic stuff-like ‘Santa’s Secret’ which were
    cluster bombs made to look like children’s toys.
     
    The Government made the decision, our Wing Commander gave
    the go and we did our duty. Our task force strikes hit Grenada,
    Panama and Iraq. Many civilians were killed by these
    deployments. They didn’t care, and no one really knew.
     
    After hearing so much bad in the world, it never hurts to hear of
    some of the good.
     
     
    Have a great week,
     
    Peace & Blessingsrwc
     

  16. The loyal Cherub says:

    I’ve loved the poem ….
     
    It’s really nice
     
    especially those words :
     
    "Put ur feet on my hands
    i will help u to climb again"
     
    we’re in a time in which people forget how to help each other …
     
    they forget that _ help is not always by material things  . . . coz ppl need immaterial help .
     
     love- kindeness -smile that wot pple need . . .
     
    ::::::
    I’ve commented on Sensitive  but I wasn’t signed in
    your words are great 🙂

  17. Trouble says:

    I loved these Sweeti..
     
    dont stop climbingwhen ur halfway the ladderu wil see light beamsnot those ugly dark cloudsi will show u the way
     
    So whassup busy bee? 🙂
     
    <HUGGZZ>
    Divoo
     

  18. rita says:

    hallo lang  geleden dat ik nog eens langskwam!!!
    maar hier ben ik dan!!!
     
    ziet er hier weer heel mooi uit
    tot later
    rita

  19. deepu says:

    hiiii Sweeeeeeeeetiii…
    i am alive…umm now thats great..eh/??
    at last i m relieved..it s been a hell of time …..was really tensed coz i had to take two oral xams, i m only comfortabl with writing…i was living water …nothing else wil go smoothly lolz…hmm niway..all went on well..now some cool time..
    how are things at your end? haaaa a biiiig hug to you for your prayers…
     
    yeaa you see not always can we make it all alone…and i certainly cant…
    smile..hugzzz

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